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I didn’t know
how much it would take
to make me bend
and then finally break.

Though I would smile,
it was all pretend.
My mind’s own excuses
had come to an end.

My façade must stop,
this detestable fake.
I need to change for yours
and for my own sake.

So now, as I’m broken,
I ask, beg you to lend
a hand, a shoulder, so
that with your help I’d mend.

I don’t ask you to forgive
me for my mistake
but I weep as I hope
that you will not forsake

me when I can’t
begin to comprehend
how I ever could deserve
a companion, a friend.

I know I’ve caused
your heart to ache.
What can I do,
what penance can I make

to be someone deserving
of this love that you send?
So that you might be
at my side until the end.

That’s all I want
is to deserve your love
and to be someone
you can be proud of.
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AShadowNamedVengance Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
Very well written
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AnimeVeteran Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. I appreciate it! ^^
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FallenArchetype Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Positively beautiful.
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:iconanimeveteran:
AnimeVeteran Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! ^^
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FallenArchetype Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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DarkZero2109 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This.

Just...


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:iconanimeveteran:
AnimeVeteran Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, man. Glad you like it! ^^
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DarkZero2109 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! :D
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